Name: Burakkusutā (ブラックスター)
Blacky; Stary; Sis; Runt; Brat;
Bounty Name: Desusutā (デススター)
Birth Date: June 21
Occupation(s): Pirate; Ninja
Origin: Nōzan Ninja Shima (ノーザン忍者島)
Place(s) Lived: Whitebeard Ship
Hair Style: Long and pulled back with a ribbon
Hair Color: Bright Blue
Eye Color: blackish greyish
Blood Type: O+
Affiliation(s): Sutākuran (スタークラン); Whitebeard Pirates; Straw Hat Pirates
Weapon(s): Twin Ninjato (忍者刀); needles; shurikens; kunais; wires; knuckle knives
Fighting Skill(s): Martial Arts; Boxing; Wrestling
Relative(s): No Blood Relatives; Marco (Adopted Father)
Soccer; Tag; Hide and Go Ninja; playing tricks; fighting; training
"YA-HOO! I'm going to be the greatest star of the Whitebeard Pirates!"; "Never lay a hand on one of my friends again, bastards!"; "Get your hands off of me!"; "Bite me!"; "I will not allow you to get past me. Not now and not ever!"; "I am the great Burakkusutā!"
Loyal, kind hearted to those closet to her
Yells a lot, can be rude, doesn't have any self awareness, first to start a fight, self center
Burakkusutā comes from a long line of assassins known as the Sutākuran. The clan was known as a group of assassins who did anything for money. They victimized people in many areas, killing many innocent people, which made them infamous in various places. Due to their actions, the entire clan was exterminated by Whitebeard sixteen years before ~MrsMommyMarlett stories. Burakkusutā, who was still an infant at the time, was taken in by Thatch, where she was raised by Marco. She showed skill and talent in her abilities from a very young age, but was still ostracized by many, blaming her for everything that the Sutākuran had done in the past. She and Lulu knew each other from childhood, and there is a possibility that they were friends from a young age, since in a flashback, Lulu thought that Burakkusutā was 'cool' and did not bear any malice over her heritage. Burakkusutā bears no malice over the loss of her clan, because she understands that her parents led a wretched life and eventually paid the price for it. Due to her ego, many people ignored her, and she constantly failed to collect any devil fruits that she keeps promising she will get.
On the day of the James Jesse landed about the Whitebeard Pirates ship, she stood on top of the mast and declared her greatness to the Marines below. At first, it seemed as if everyone ignored her and left, but then Burakkusutā found Jesse applauding. Impressed that someone had noticed her greatness for the first time, the two introduced each other, and after finding out that Jesse was a young Marine, she help get Jesse to become one of the Whitebeard Pirates with Lulu's help.
Burakkusutā(ブラックスター) is a character I came up with after I watch Soul Eater. In English her name is Black Star. I kind of gender bend and crossover Soul Eater into One Piece. She is base off of Black*Star from Soul Eater in every way, but after the 2YT she changes into a more mature person.
One Piece, Marco, Thatch, Whitebeard, and Whitebeard Pirates © by Eiichiro Oda-senpai
Black*Star © by Atsushi Ohkubo-senpai
Lulu Newgate, James Jesse, and Burakkusutā © by ~MrsMommyMarlett
Base Image © by ~Destinys-Heart fav.me/d2t760z
One Piece Logo Image © by ~mcmgcls fav.me/d5vt81w
I think Burakkusuta is a bit cliche... I'd recommend names like Hoshi, Kira, Shin (all are written in the same character means 'star') and a last name containing 'black' (Kuro, kuroi,...) than actual English translation like this. Or maybe you should try Kurosei, which's a neutral name literally translate as 'Black star'. It'd be much more suitable, don't you think?
And on a side note, female ninja is not a word. The correct word is 'kunoichi'. Ninjutsu is like mixed martial arts, it can't really be considered a 'hobby' because it supposed to be very intense, so 'Go Ninja' is a bit... inaccurate
Sorry if I was being a royal ass, it's just that I've been doing researches about this topic for a while now and it sorta itches me, you know ;;;XD
Well, she's too heavily based on him from what I see. You should try developing her a bit so that she's more original. By the way, I love her personality.
That's okay, she's yours after all. It's not like she's going anywhere :")
Haha, you're trying to get your old OC up and I'm trying to get the new ones out XD They've been sitting at the back at my mind for a while now and they're impatient as hell to get out. But I'm a little busy, so they just have to wait XD